OMGWTFBBQ!!?!

[jmc_bks]

Being a sheep, I picked up a copy of Lover Enshrined from the library.


1. penile system =/= a criminal system. Unless one is writing about a reproductive or urological problem, the desired word is probably "penal".
2. Stop with the giggly teenaged girl language coming out of the mouths of 6.5' badasses. And with the the texting language. It ruins the badass image.
3. Mr. N's narration was painful. I kept thinking of Foghorn Leghorn as I read, which I'm pretty sure wasn't the image Ward wanted in my head. Which brings me to...
4. Nine POVs? Nine? Were that many really necessary? Phury, Cormia, John Matthew, Qhuinn, Rehvenge, Xhex, Lash, Mr. N, Scribe Virgin. I could be missing some.

Comments

[tinyluv.livejournal.com]

I actually thought this was better than the one before. I think because I was totally resigned to a lackluster romance that the fact that Phury and Cornea (which is how I think of her) were less interesting than a pile of poop on a sidewalk did not bother.

The texting was hysterical but I liked the Qhuinn/Bhlay storyline. I felt like it was a setup for a reuiniting in some later book. But i've heard this is not true. . .

[jmc-bks.livejournal.com]

I was wondering the same thing about Q/B.