OMGWTFBBQ!!?!
Jun. 6th, 2008 09:17 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
jmc_bksBeing a sheep, I picked up a copy of Lover Enshrined from the library.
1. penile system =/= a criminal system. Unless one is writing about a reproductive or urological problem, the desired word is probably "penal".
2. Stop with the giggly teenaged girl language coming out of the mouths of 6.5' badasses. And with the the texting language. It ruins the badass image.
3. Mr. N's narration was painful. I kept thinking of Foghorn Leghorn as I read, which I'm pretty sure wasn't the image Ward wanted in my head. Which brings me to...
4. Nine POVs? Nine? Were that many really necessary? Phury, Cormia, John Matthew, Qhuinn, Rehvenge, Xhex, Lash, Mr. N, Scribe Virgin. I could be missing some.
1. penile system =/= a criminal system. Unless one is writing about a reproductive or urological problem, the desired word is probably "penal".
2. Stop with the giggly teenaged girl language coming out of the mouths of 6.5' badasses. And with the the texting language. It ruins the badass image.
3. Mr. N's narration was painful. I kept thinking of Foghorn Leghorn as I read, which I'm pretty sure wasn't the image Ward wanted in my head. Which brings me to...
4. Nine POVs? Nine? Were that many really necessary? Phury, Cormia, John Matthew, Qhuinn, Rehvenge, Xhex, Lash, Mr. N, Scribe Virgin. I could be missing some.
