You lost me
Oct. 4th, 2007 04:03 pmI'm reading Laurel Ames's Castaway, an historical set in Bristol and the nearby countryside in 1818. (Is that still the Regency period?) And Ames had me, all my attention. I liked the main character, I was interested in how he was handling what was going on in his world (the narration is all from his POV, y'see). But then he announced that he was in love with the heroine without any hints or build up. Did I miss the trail of breadcrumbs scattered through the story? Was there build up to the internal declaration and I just missed it? No. It was a thunderclap, apparently. Which I might accept in some instances, but which doesn't work so much here.
:sigh: But I'm enjoying the book otherwise, so I'm not going to toss it aside. Plus, I have a weakness for sailor and merchant heroes. Ames reminds me vaguely of Carla Kelly, which also inclines me toward patience.
:sigh: But I'm enjoying the book otherwise, so I'm not going to toss it aside. Plus, I have a weakness for sailor and merchant heroes. Ames reminds me vaguely of Carla Kelly, which also inclines me toward patience.
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Date: 2007-10-05 01:35 am (UTC)You asked.
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Date: 2007-10-05 12:49 pm (UTC)Thank you :)